Week 6 - Super Crit

I wasn't very confident with what I had produced at this stage but still had a clear idea on what I wanted to accomplish. On the left is almost the end goal when it comes to the cover and feel of the back vs on the right what I've done so far (not much let's be honest).


I want to use a fabric for the cover and not sure about the layout and binding at this stage but on my to do list!




5/10 Report


Hey Jo & Lee,

During SuperCrit I got the following feedback:

1/ To have more of a humorous & light tone as opposed to being too serious. I found this useful as it has given me a direction for the content inside the publication. 

To add a more playfulness to the hybridisation. Even if it is a self exploration/personal journey there can be an educational aspect for others. 
Could it then become more interactive?

It is very important to do a page plan to define how small or large the book will be along with the type of binding I will use. 

2/ During the break I will complete my page plan and layout. I will also test out what binding style will work best with what I want to achieve. I should also have most of the content sussed.

3/ I saw many dedicated students that produced immense detailed work. To be honest it definitely made me more motivated to do more work and get more feedback. From the work that I saw, the intention/backbone of the project was nailed down and easy to articulate. 

Thank you,

Richie 

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